30 Poems in 30 Days with 30 Forms

Urdu Poetry

Urdu is the national language of Pakistan and an official language of five Indian states. Urdu poetry has many different forms with origins in Arabic and Persian traditions. And Urdu poetry tends to have strict rules. I chose to play with the poetic form of a Ghazal (pronounced “guzzle”). A Ghazal is an Arabic love poem. The poet might choose one concept to incorporate (for example, love, death, spring, etc). But one element of a Ghazal is that each couplet could stand alone as an independent poem. Consider my Ghazal as a variation on this form.

The Ghazal is a collection of couplets. Typically the couplets range from 6-24 syllables in each line. There is a rhyme scheme of aA, bA, cA, dA, eA, etc. with the first and second lines of the first couplet incorporating the rhyme. In subsequent couplets, only the second line uses the original rhyme. Similarly, if a refrain is used, it appears at the end of both lines in the first couplet and in the second line of subsequent couplets. And finally, the author will insert their name into the last line of the ghazal. Since my poem is a mask poem, you will find the name being used is not mine. 

brittlebush

 

huddled with sisters and brothers in clusters -overlooked

mistaken for a weed, dull-droopy fluster -overlooked

 

trailside dot, no beauty mark, but gray-green leaf

close up, softest hairs keep me cool, I muster – overlooked

 

my yellow smile, desert spring’s recital

cousin to sunflower, without the bluster – overlooked

 

other desert fauna wilt from overheat,

a dry arroyo, barren but for dust-ers, overlooked

 

waving by the roadside, soaking in sunshine

I, brittlebush, greet flies and lizard trusters -overlooked

 

 

©draft, Patricia J. Franz

April 21, 2023

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